Hallo,
ich bin gerade dabei meine US-Bewerbung fertigzustellen und habe diese weitgehens grob zusammengestellt und würde mich über Hilfe von Euch sehr freuen.
Vorab möchte ich noch folgendes sagen, um vielleicht einige Fragen vorwegnehmen zu können:
Seit Ende meiner Ausbildung (Kaufmännisch) arbeite ich seit ca, 2,5 Jahren in einem großen Zeitarbeitsunternehmen und habe dort
verscheidenen Internationalen Unternehmen (über längere Zeiträume 1/2-1 Jahr) kennengelernt. Nun möchte ich vor Beginn meines Studiums mithilfe einer Agentur
die mir das J1 Visum ausstellt, ein Praktiukum in den USA absolvieren (Max 12 Monate). Die Agenutur teilte mir mit, dass dies Chancen sehr gut stehen das J1 zu bekommen,
wenn man folgende Voraussetzungen mitbringt:
- ein Studium erfolgreich abgeschlossen oder eine Berufsausbildung oder Vergleichbares absolviert haben und mindestens ein Jahr relevante Berufserfahrung.
Soweit so gut.Meinungen? Den Praktikumsplatz und die Unterkunft muss ich mir allerdings selbst suchen. Wird sicherlich keine leichte Aufgabe werden, aber ich möchte es zumindest versucht haben.
Und nun zur Bewerbung... Ich bin mir was die Grammatik und Satzformulierung angeht noch nicht ganz so sicher und habe einige kleine Sätze, wo ich mir nicht sicher war, durch den translator übersetzen lassen...
Ich bin sonst, was den Aufbau und Inhalt angeht, mit der Bewerbung recht zufrieden. Verbesserungsvorschläge begrüße ich dennoch.
Ich Bedanke mich vorab schonmal recht herzlich.
Grüße
__________________________________________________ _____
(Date)
(Your Name)
(YourAddress)
Ms. Helen Jones
Manager of Recruitment
Marketing Northwest, inc.
12 E. Burnside Avenue
Boston, MA 02116
Dear Ms.XXXXX,
I am writing to explore the possibility of participating in a practical training program at your organization.
As a businessman with several years of professional experience and completed training in Germany, I would like to expand my knowledge in foreign countries.
Undertaking such a placement with your company would prove an invaluable experience, both professionally and personally.
In regards to my legal eligibility to train with your organization, I would be participating in CIEE’s Trainee Program, which is sponsored by the Council on International Educational Exchange. As my sponsor, CIEE is authorized by the US government to issue the necessary documentation for me to obtain a J-1 visa, which allows me to train legally in the US for up to twelve months.
As my enclosed resume indicates, my studies and work experience revolve around the business sector in different areas.Through the experience of the varied tasks that I have ever met in my career, I learned about this groups in its organizational structure and I am able to quickly familiarize myself with new subjects. New areas, I am curious to me, and it works on a systematic manner.
I would highly appreciate the opportunity to apply my expertise in an international working environment and to support your company in the daily business.
I am focused, enthusiastic abouth learning, and would like to learn more about business in the US, in order to expand my global understanding of business and its impact on consumers, both in the US, and abroad.
I strongly believe that my studies, experience, and personal skills would allow me to excel in a training position at your company. Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. I can best be contacted a (phone number) or visa email at (email address).
Sincerely,
(signature)
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Resume:
(Your Name)
(YourAddress)
(Phone)
(Email)
Personal Profile
Dynamic businessman with training in Germany and subsequent years of professional experience in various international corporations. Strong organizational and Communication skills with advanced language and computer skills.
Internship Objective
Economical Management of a twelve month Internship in a globally oriented U.S.-based firm to gain experience in the field.
Work Experience
(March 2007 to date)
Commercial employee (full-time, Temporary work), Hamburg, working at:
(Company xxxxx), Commercial Operation, Hamburg
- Processing English presentations (MS PowerPoint),
- Planning and maintenance of the course attendance lists.
- Organization and preparation of training courses
(Company xxxxx), Import/Export (SAP/R3), Hamburg
- Processing of shipping documents (customs documentation and freight forwarding)
- Shipping the goods
- Clerical and General Office Organization
(Company xxxxx), Customer Service / Controlling (SAP/R3), Hamburg
- Event coordination and Maintenance of databases
- Complaints handling and customer service
- Customer care and support of technicians
(Company xxxxx), Team Assistant (SAP/R3), Hamburg
- Carries out and edit material orders
- Organization and management of staff training and staff briefings
- Appointments and management for members of the management teams of both groups
(06/2006 - 09/2006)
Sales Person (full-time), at (Company xxxxx), Hamburg
- Preperation of offers and requests
- Order processing and customer Service
- Alignment and coordination of internal appointments up to the complaint processing.
- Processing correspondence and conversations Foreign customers (in englisch).
Education
(02/2007 - 03/2007)
Modular training for merchants and Technicians with SAP/R3
(08/2003 - 06/2006)
apprenticeship for merchant for office communication at (Company xxxxx),Hamburg
(with Chamber of Commerce degree).
Skills
Computer: Microsoft Office XP (Word, Excel, Outlook, PowerPoint, Access) ● SAP/R3 ● Microsoft Windows 7
Language and Communication: ● German (native speaker) ● English (advanced) ● Italian (basic)
