Ich muss ein Bewerbungsschreiben auf maximal 1000 Zeichen reduzieren. Ich habe schon so viel reduziert. Mein ursprüngliches Schreiben war mindestens 600 Zeichen länger. Aber jetzt bin ich am Ende ... Es ist im Grunde nur noch ein einziger Satz zu viel :/... Ich hätte gerne mal eure Meinung dazu.
Dear Ms. Musterrr,
I am currently employed as a graphic designer at an ad agency in Germany. I am looking for new inspiring possibilities and challenges in the
USA, which is why I am excited to board on the MediaFire cloud.
I am very interested in user interface design and I already worked on two mobile app designs (iOS/Android). When working on websites I keep my code W3C valid, clean and as non-redundant as possible, while using my toolsets to their fullest extent - this includes HTML5 and CSS3.
I am eager to further develop my skills as a graphic designer. Especially UI design is something that I am absolutely thrilled to participate in at MediaFire. I work well in a team as well as working alone, while still keeping in mind to prepare my working files for other team members.
I am the perfect fit for MediaFire, because we both share the same goal: To make your cloud services as appealing as possible for existing, as well as potential users.
I hope we can achieve this goal toget
her and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Michael Duelong
Ab dem rot markierten Bereich wird es abgeschnitten. Ich muss mir jetzt überlegen, was ich kürze. Für mich kommt eigentlich nur die Textpassage "while still keeping in mind to prepare my working files for other team members." in Frage, aber dann ist der Satz ziemlich fad? Was meint ihr?
